9 January 2012

In-between


A dream 
of travelling 
together 
hands in hands 
head on shoulders
slow steps
longer silence
soothing atmosphere
all seems golden
night lovelier 
Roads never ends
and then comes a bend 
you walk alone 
on that same road 
you are single
yet you aren't 
and that adds 
to the confusion
single but committed
committed yet single 
is it forever 
or 
never ?

Picture Courtesy : Google 

5 comments:

  1. Woww thats was nice...
    once u r singing "Do deewane is sheher mein" and next minute u end crooning "ek akele is sheher mein"

    thats life.. It changes in a hearbeat...

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  2. Obviously committed..but just a single question rings in the mind..committed to whom? to myself or is it someone else? and how can we define 'someone else'?

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  3. We often get fooled by the picture.. what we call "Murgi"..

    check..

    http://bhaktacharyya.blogspot.com/2012/01/gallus-gallus-domesticus.html

    ..a post provoked by you. :)

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  4. True Suresh, that's life. It all changes in a minute rather fraction of a second ..

    Bhaktt, glad this time you read the thoughts behind this poem rightly :)And yes, I will jump in there. Obviously eager to know how I provoked you :P

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  5. Ms C,

    Being in love built up well with such twist in end - single but committed , committed yet single - with question mark.

    Take care

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