A dream
of travelling
together
hands in hands
head on shoulders
slow steps
longer silence
soothing atmosphere
all seems golden
night lovelier
Roads never ends
and then comes a bend
you walk alone
on that same road
you are single
yet you aren't
and that adds
to the confusion
single but committed
committed yet single
is it forever
or
never ?
or
never ?
Picture Courtesy : Google
Woww thats was nice...
ReplyDeleteonce u r singing "Do deewane is sheher mein" and next minute u end crooning "ek akele is sheher mein"
thats life.. It changes in a hearbeat...
Obviously committed..but just a single question rings in the mind..committed to whom? to myself or is it someone else? and how can we define 'someone else'?
ReplyDeleteWe often get fooled by the picture.. what we call "Murgi"..
ReplyDeletecheck..
http://bhaktacharyya.blogspot.com/2012/01/gallus-gallus-domesticus.html
..a post provoked by you. :)
True Suresh, that's life. It all changes in a minute rather fraction of a second ..
ReplyDeleteBhaktt, glad this time you read the thoughts behind this poem rightly :)And yes, I will jump in there. Obviously eager to know how I provoked you :P
Ms C,
ReplyDeleteBeing in love built up well with such twist in end - single but committed , committed yet single - with question mark.
Take care